PRODUCT HOOK WORKSHOP — HEXWAVE

Work from real footage or a verified action. The examples below illustrate
editorial choices, not proven increases in views or conversion.

Product / model / source:
Intended viewer and situation:
Literal description of the useful moment in the footage:
What the product does NOT establish:

CANDIDATE A
Opening words:
First picture:
What the viewer should expect next:
Shot that fulfills the promise:
Closing action:

CANDIDATE B
Opening words:
First picture:
What stays the same as A:
What changes:

PATTERNS TO TRY
Question: Which file should the client review?
  Needs readable ambiguity, then an actual route to the current file.
Action: Move this divider to make room for the charger.
  Needs the movement and its actual result, without swapping the product.
Boundary: This size holds the notebook, not this laptop.
  Needs identified items, dimensions and a fair fit demonstration.
Useful instruction: Before you send feedback, point to the intended change.
  Needs an actual or labeled illustrative comment and a reasoned revision.
Objection: What happens when the import has an empty field?
  Needs the real product response and required correction.

REVIEW
What does an unfamiliar viewer think the video will explain?
Does the final cut actually explain it?
Can the opening be read/heard without rushing?
Are the claim and scene consistent?

AFTER PUBLICATION
Version / date / destination / relevant observations:
What else changed besides the opening?
Do not treat a single organic comparison as causal proof.